1. Revision Plan- I need to elaborate with most of my paragraphs, and I need better transition sentences. I also really need to work on the focus of my paper to make sure I continue on the same plan so it makes sense to the reader. When I write, I tend to be jumbled and get back revisions like, "You lost focus" so I will try to work on that. I also need to capture my reader's attention in the beginning so they will actually care about what they are reading. Last but not least, at the end I need to really explain what I learned throughout my experience so that the paper will be worth reading.
2. Editing- I need to elaborate and explain words like there and it. I plan to fix some of my commas and work on sentence structure. I also need to broaden my vocabulary.
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